[LMB] SP: TSK: Beguilement Chapter 3

[Mitch Miller]

Haven't read the book yet, but, um, Victoria, there's this whole
boy/girl thing, y'know?

To quote Herself in another setting (DI), "She had the kind of 
cheekbones that make men get morosely drunk, write bad poetry, and
desert their regiments." (From memory, not verbatim.)

Mitch Miller



From: "Victoria L'Ecuyer" <vlecuyer at ksu.edu>

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Chapter 3



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My main issue with this chapter.... Dag behaved counter to his 
established behavior and demonstrated characteristics in chapters one 
and two.

He, an experienced patroller/soldier-analog, ignored a known threat in 
favor of cooing over a doe-eyed girl. Since Fawn was not hysterical from 
the near rape, he had no legitimate reason to stop his hunt and lose 
several hours getting her to safety. This sudden and unexplained hard 
left turn in Dag's character development pulled me out of the story. 
There was no explanation either internally through thought or externally 
in description for Dag's sudden change in operating procedures.
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