[LMB] Passage: Technical Question

Jim Parish jparish at siue.edu
Fri May 2 21:29:09 BST 2008


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Sandra Joiner wrote:   .
> I did have a nagging editing wonder. It's just a small thing and I don't
> have the text in  front of me to refer to the specific page, but I believe
> its shortly after page 100, just as Fawn is getting her first look at 'The
> Fetch' with Berry. After seeing the goat Fawn makes a statement that
>   they have "milk, and some eggs." However I can't find any
>   description or reference to chickens aboard.

Chickens are mentioned on p. 99:
"[I]t [Berry's boat] had an empty animal pen in one corner of the bow. 
Some chickens were penned on the opposite side, pecking up a 
scattering of corn"

Jim Parish

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