[LMB] first mutant fruits
Lois McMaster Bujold
lbujold at myinfmail.com
Sat May 3 04:29:03 BST 2008
[LMB] first mutant fruits
Jill Tallman lettuce_in_fl at yahoo.com
Sat May 3 03:17:12 BST 2008
--- Lois McMaster Bujold <lbujold at myinfmail.com> wrote:
> Oopsie --
snipped
> If anyone else has good catches, send 'em along
> as usual, and
> I'll accumulate them against the day.
>
> bests, Lois.
I caught this on my first read-thru, but didn't know if I
should mention it.
page 363, in the second and third lines:
...Dag was so winded he had to stop and put his hands on
his knees...
one too many hands here
Jill
*** Ah ha, good-oh.
At least one too many; there could be more; recall that infamous romance
cover.
I eliminated several twin sibs of that slip in various places throughout
the tetrology, but that one slid past. Possibly everyone was reading
too fast at that point, or so I can console myself. Thanks!
L.
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