[LMB] first mutant fruits

Lois McMaster Bujold lbujold at myinfmail.com
Sat May 3 04:29:03 BST 2008


[LMB] first mutant fruits
Jill Tallman lettuce_in_fl at yahoo.com
Sat May 3 03:17:12 BST 2008

--- Lois McMaster Bujold <lbujold at myinfmail.com> wrote:

 > Oopsie --
snipped
 > If anyone else has good catches, send 'em along
 > as usual, and
 > I'll accumulate them against the day.
 >
 >     bests, Lois.


I caught this on my first read-thru, but didn't know if I
should mention it.

page 363, in the second and third lines:
...Dag was so winded he had to stop and put his hands on
his knees...
one too many hands here

Jill


***  Ah ha, good-oh.

At least one too many; there could be more; recall that infamous romance 
cover.

I eliminated several twin sibs of that slip in various places throughout 
the tetrology, but that one slid past.  Possibly everyone was reading 
too fast at that point, or so I can console myself.  Thanks!

L.




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