[LMB] phrases to hate

Hide Deer hid.deer at gmail.com
Thu Apr 23 16:13:16 BST 2009


someone else (sorry, didn't keep post) posted oxfords 'worst phrase' list.

there are a couple of people on fanfic.net whose stuff i read.  most
have decent grammar, but a few...  don't.   i know, i know, what do
you expect form that site?

spelling:

A feint gasp

in know time

turned on his heals

he was sick, then he came too



phrases that i had to read twice:

Joshua screamed out loud  (how else?)

“Damn right,” yelled back Dan his honesty flung back harder than any
physical punch. (commas are free.  here, have some!)


ziviya




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